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Change of Heart Chapter 5Chapter 5: Break Up

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Ding-dong! Ding-dong! Ding-dong!

The chiming of the door bell echoed through Zuko's house. When he heard it, Zuko groaned inwardly. Turning the TV off, he stood up from the couch and headed to the intercom near the entrance elevator.

"Who is it?" he told the intercom. He made sure to always check who was at the door from the intercom first before he unlocked the elevator doors below. He had experienced one too many cases of rabid fangirls visiting him and begging for his autograph or his picture or his lips on theirs.

A deep masculine voice answered him. "It's me, kiddo! Open up."

Zuko turned on the TV beside the

Frostbitten Fire Part 2“What do you think of the North Pole Firelord Zuko?” Chief Arnook asked. “Well…it really is different than home,” Zuko replied. Chief Arnook was sitting between Zuko and Hakoda while Katara sat by Zuko, and Sokka sat by their father, so they were in a circle. Hakoda commented, “It really is.” “Ya, even the people are different,” Sokka broke in. “What do you mean?’ the Chief asked. “It’s better not to ask what Sokka means sir,” Katara smiled. Hakoda and Zuko laughed, while all Sokka did was grumble. Chief Arnook spoke, “Well, I don’t see that difference as a bad th

Hakoda's Backstory"I don't want to go with you to see your stupid friend!" 13 year old Hakoda yelled at his 9 year old cousin.
"Why not!" Kya pleaded, "You told my dad you wanted to come with us on our trip around the world!"
"I do!" Hakoda yelled back.
"Well you can't go on a trip around the world without going to the Fire Nation capital!" Kya yelled.
Hakoda just huffed and turned his back on the little girl. But he knew she was right. Hakoda knew that his Uncle Aang needed to see Fire Lord Zuko, but he really didn't want to see Anna-Lee. Hakoda thought Anna-Lee was crazy for not firebending. No matter how many times Kya tried to explain it, Hakoda just c

Never Stopped Lovin' UIt was an abnormally warm morning in the Earth Kingdom capital. The early morning sun glimmered through the clouds with an orange, fuchsia hue making the city seem tranquil. Little birds chirped quietly as the citizens got ready for the common day of work. Somewhere by the Royal Palace the young members of Team Avatar were sleeping peacefully in their upper-ring house. All five of the young heroes were meeting together for a celebration of the end of the 100 year war. It was also the first time that the Avatar would be joining them for the celebration in two years. The last time they had saw him he was only fifteen; not yet a grown man, but n

Stand in the Rain"She won't turn around, the shadows are long and she fears if she cries that first tear, the tears will not stop raining down. So stand in the rain, stand your ground, stand up when it's all crashing down. You stand through the pain, you won't drown, and one day what's lost can be found. You stand in the rain."
"Stand in the Rain" by Superchick

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Usually the rain made her feel better. Surrounded naturally by her own element was always refreshing; it was a welcome change to the cold and quiet snow of the South Pole. She relished the droplets falling all around her, taking solace in the steady sound. This time, however,

Change in Destiny: Chapter 2

Chapter 2:

Zuko gently touched the soft cloths with his fingers, he had his eyes closed. They had arrived in their tribe two hours ago. They let the boy Aang sleep somewhere, They had asked him would look after the boy, but he too needed some rest. He wanted to think about the things that had happened today. So much happened in just a few hours. He wondered if this would change everything.

'their tribe' he suddenly realized.

Yes, their tribe, Sokka and Katara's tribe. He was just an outlander, at least he thought so. 'Every single person here thinks I'm Earth Kingdom' he thought bitterly, all his whole life. 'But I'm not.'

He felt the pai

The Note-Makorra*This is Makorra in 2012, modern, no tea shop, more like Starbucks*

"I could have taken her!! but you two just had to stop me!" Korra yelled.

To be honest,Mako didn't really know why he hung out with Korra, she was an annoying hothead who always got on his bad side, she was luckly he.. never mind he thought. Korra had been in a fight at their high school, Korra started it, she wouldn't admit it but she did she got in a fight about how the school was named after her father they both went at each other.

"Yeah, you could have, that was a problem for the girl," Bolin said slightly laughing, Korra threw him a glare.

"Shut up, both of you Korra

Umbrella-Makorra#23
Umbrella
Mako watched Korra skulk along beside him in the rain. He held out the red umbrella for her to take cover but she waved it away. Boy was she stubborn.
"Come on, I said I was sorry." Korra cast those sapphire orbs at him which could cut air into thin slices.
"You're soaked to the bone. Please come back under." She ignored him and kept walking. Her hair stuck to her face, her ponytails falling from their ceremonial water beads. Her shirt was soaked clean through but Mako didn't necessarily mind that part.
"Ok Korra I give up; stay out there for as long as you want."
"I'm not coming back under until you apologize." Mako

Warm Me With Your Touch MakorraKorra had always been cold. Growing up in the Southern Water Tribe, the wind seeped through her bones and settled there permanently. Maybe that's why her heart was hard? No matter how anyone tried to crack it, they would end up getting hurt (sometimes physically). Korra could handle anything. Or so she thought. She could handle an ambush of Equalists or intense air bending training with Tenzin. She could handle leaving her home to become a fully realized Avatar. She could even handle the weight of the world's problems on her shoulders. But why had he walked into her life? This pain was more than she could bear. Her icy heart threatened to bre

Something ChangesShe still notices him, of course. She's not sure she'll ever be able not to.

But now, the heiress's wounded eyes prod at her conscience. She knows she's hurt the other girl—inadvertently, perhaps, but hurt her nonetheless.

That's what drives her to sit her new friend down, confess everything that had happened, and promise that there will be no such incidents in the future. Whatever it is that she feels for her rangy, amber-eyed former teammate, she won't be acting upon it.

The secret, she learns, is already out, pried from the sweet-faced junior brother.  But whatever else happens, t

Jinoochy Love At a Party 4 Skoochy ran off after making sure that Jinora and Korra made it safely inside the building, he ran off in the direction of the Central City Station. Only to be stopped by Mako.

"Skoochy? What're you doing here?" Mako asked curiously. Skoochy looked up to meet hte firebender's amber gaze and saw worry in his eyes

>HE THINKS I'M STEALING!!< Skoochy thought indignantly.

Skoochy hadn't broken his stare,In a hard voice Skoochy said
"I'm. Not. Stealing.!" then walked away from the firebender.

Skoochy continued his walk back to Central City Station. Then reached into his pocket to check and see how many Yuans he had.

>1...5..10...15?!?! I wo

Borra:Something Special "NO! You need to put your weight on the next foot and then strike!! GEEZE ITS THAT SIMPLE!!!" Mako screamed as he began throwing fireballs at me. Sometimes I swear its like we were enemies in the past life or something! I just shift my weight and strike, yes! I did it! "Good try again!" he shouted at me, I sifted my weight to the other foot and shot a rather a large fireball.
"Okay that's enough for today." he said handing me a towel, I took it and walked out the door making a piece sign,"Peace Out!" I yelled. Before I could walk out the door I ran into Bolin...literaly. "Oh! Bolin are you okay?!" I helped him up,"Yeah considering the fact that you nearly busted my head wide open." he chuckled, I just rolled my eyes. How can Mako and Bolin be brothers when they're nothing alike?! It sure does raise some questions that I can't answer. I noticed he had a black eye, it was bleeding at the bottom and I think it was oozing pus,"Bolin why do you have a bleeding black eye and why

Ch.74: Softer than expected

Lost in the screams of pain is a chapter story,
All the stories are about fragments out of Zuko's and Iroh's lives.

This story happens after [Book 3, ep.16: The Ember Island Players].

Zuko isn't the hard disciplined soldier they knew, he's much softer than expected. The young ex-Prince learns every day a little more.

Zuko is sixteen,
Sokka is fifteen,
Suki is fifteen,
Katara is fourteen,
Toph is twelve,
Aang is twelve.

Lost in the screams of pain,
Chapter 74: Softer than expected.

The sun descended, its rays were soft and a treasure trove of colors. There was a beautiful view from the beach, where all the young teens were at the

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by ~Shippo3313, Sep 22, 2011, 4:33:29 AM
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I'm not tellin you nothing about this story because you will have to see by your own what's happening.

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I still remembber my chilhood in Southen Water Tribe , i was staying there with my dad, because my mom was in the Fire natiom and she couldn't stay with me, she was the Avatar she was the Fire Lord. I remember how i felt in love with a general. I was 20, i was helping my father training the waterbenders. Yes i am a waterbender, but now i just heal. A Fire Nation Ship was arriving, then i saw a general coming. I knew that to go to him was my buissines.
"Hi! Can i help you?" I said to him.
"I am looking for the Fire Nation Princess Mia. Do you know where i can find her?" He said to me. Well i was the firenation Princess.
"Well... You are talking to her."
"I am sorry your highnes!"
"Stop this! why are you looking for me?"
"Your mom has to travel for some time, and she wants you to take care of the nation."
"Well this is a hard decision, but i am the princess and i have to do it. Ok, we are going tomorrow morning. Is that ok?"
"Of course princess."
"Just tell me Mia. By the way what's your name?"
" My name is Chan, and I am the royal general of the Fire Nation."
"OK Chan, see you."
" See you princess.. i mean Mia"
In that moment i felt in love his light skin, his black hair and his amber eyes, but he's just a general and i am a princess, my mom would kill me if she knew that i felt in love with a general. But it's my own life and even don't want this throne, I want to travel around the world, I want to learn about the other nations with the man i love. I have to tell mom that i want another way, she has to listen to me once.

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The next morning i felt depresed living all of those children without a master because my dad came with me either. I went into my cabin, and i started crying, I didn't know what to do, what to say. Then somebody knocked at the door.
"Mia are you alright? I was looking for you." That was Chan when I heard his voice, my tears disapeared.
"Yes I'm alright, come in I have to tell you something."

"Hey.. Were you crying?" He could read me, i was crying.
"Yes, I was crying." Then he came to me and gave me a hug.
"It's alright everybody cryes, even me sometimes. Can you tell me why you were crying?"
"I don't know what to do with my life. I don't even want ot be a princess, I want to travel. But my mom never listen to me. And there is something else. I felt in love, with someone i would never should."
"It doesn't matter who's the guy, but he is very lucky. You can tell me who is, i won't tell your mom." How i can tell him that he's the one i love, my first love.
"Promise?" But i decided to do it.
"Promise"
"I.. I... felt in love with.. with you Chan!" That's it i feel so embaresed.But when i looked at him he just blushed and he opened his mouth trying to say something.
" Well I love you too. When i saw you, your blue eyes, you blonde hair..." The man of my life loves me too , thet's the best day ever.
"You don't have to say anything else, i feel the same" Then i gave him a short kiss on his lips, after that he gave me a long pasional kiss. From then we were dating and kissing each other but nothing else, that was pure love between us. After an year of relationship i went to my mom to tell her the truth.
"Helloe mom."
"Hello swettie. Can I help you." In that moment I knew that i couldn't hold back.
"I am here to say you that i have a relationship with someone for 1 year." Ok I'm dead, Mia prepare for the flames.
"That's not a very big problem. Can you tell me who the lucky one is?" What no flames, but wait the second part.
"General Chan." Ok now i am dead.
"I knew it. I didn't know why he was staying near the palace, but i now i know why." Am i lucky or my mom finally understands me?
"Aren't you upset?"
"How can i be upset, my daugheter is in love. Let me ask you something, do you think that your father was a nobil? He was just a man from the Water Tribe." Just a man, i didn't know this.
"So can I live to tell him?"
"Go and be happy."
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"Chan, Chan!"
"Hey what's wrong?"
"We can finally date without hiding."
"Is that possible?"
"Yes it is. I love you."
"I love you too!"
After those words we kissed in public for the frist time

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I hope you like it, i worked at it 5 hours.
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~2nanna2 Feb 6, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Cool

~Shippo3313 Feb 6, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

thx! sorry for the grammar errors but my keyboard hates me
if you liked the first part you are going to love the others

~2nanna2 Feb 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

~h2ogirl98 Nov 19, 2011 Student Writer

Nice story. You need to look over it alittle

~Shippo3313 Nov 20, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

yes, my keyboard really annoys me andmy english.. well.
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